Don't Use Backstory Dumps
Definition = large chunks of information about events that take place before the novel begins, often history about the main character
EXAMPLE:
The main character was a victim of theft six months ago and she thinks her ex-fiancé did it. A backstory dump would drop in all of the information on when it happened, what was missing, and why she thinks her ex-fiancé was behind it.
Why we should avoid backstory dumps
1) They don't move the story forward.
2) They slow down the pace of the story.
3) Less backstory is needed to explain the events of the novel than most new authors think. Only put in enough to explain something the reader MUST know to understand the current events.
4) Agents and editors don't like to see backstory dumps in the first chapter. Some don't even like to see them in the first three chapters.
5) They often jar the reader because they stop the forward motion of the story, jump backward, then drop the reader into the current story again.
How to fix backstory dumps
Determine which parts of the backstory dumps (if any) are truly necessary to allow the reader to understand what's going on in the story. Parcel out those important pieces in tiny bits where each is important. Resist the urge to explain everything and only include enough to explain what is currently happening.
EXAMPLE:
Let's say the main character in the above example has been through as series of events which have brought her to the brink of poverty.
Bits of backstory could be inserted in the following places, but only the pertinent information, not the entire backstory dump.
1) She's scouring the house for items she can sell on-line to get some quick cash and thinks of all the things she lost in the robbery that she could have sold.
2) Her ex calls with information that could lead to a windfall for her. She remembers why she thinks he was behind the robbery and wonders if she can trust him.
Learning how to drop in backstory without jarring the reader or stopping the story makes the story flow much better. So find those backstory dumps, ruthlessly weed them out, and find more natural ways to drop in the information that is essential. Your story will be much better for it.
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Suzanne Hartmann - 2012
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