Friday, November 20, 2009

LESSONS FROM REJECTION LETTERS

Rejection letters are frustrating…very frustrating. But if you’re an author seeking publication, you can almost bank on the fact that you will receive some—probably many. As the rejections pile up, it’s easy to blame the publishing industry, to become bitter over the process, or to give up. Been there, done that, and it didn’t do any good. The better option is to learn from the rejection letters. If we look for the lessons that come with the rejections, and are willing to learn, then we will become better writers, which in turn, will lead to better prospects for getting our beloved book published.

The most frustrating rejections are the generic ones. It seems like they say nothing, but when we receive one after another after another, we need to realize that they're saying something is wrong, even though they don’t tell us what it is. Many times it’s simply that our manuscript isn't ready. It may simply have too many grammatical mistakes or stylistic flaws or something serious like cardboard characters or a rambling plot. So we need to go back to our critique groups or books on the craft of writing or notes from writing classes and look for what we missed. We need to find whatever it is, be open to learning, then start applying it to our manuscript.

Generally speaking, I’m a quick learner, but it still took almost thirty rejection letters (including a few with personal notes) before I finally got the message that my novel needed another major overhaul. I didn't want to get it, to be honest. I wanted to believe that my novel had already been polished and perfected and was ready to be published, but that wasn’t the truth. After spending six more months revising, and dropping my wordcount almost twenty-five percent, I started getting more requests. Eventually I received one of those "good rejections." I took the agent's advice, made major changes to my first three chapters, then resubmitted, which eventually let to an offer of a contract.

To those of you still waiting (and I'm talking to myself as well, although my rejections now will be from publishers rather than agents), I’d like to say: listen to what the rejections say (sometimes between the lines). Listen and respond. They are telling us that we need to do something. We need to find out what it is--often by having others review our work--then be willing to listen and learn and apply what we've learned. In the end, we have a better manuscript, which means more likelihood that an agent or publisher will snap up our work.

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Wednesday, November 18, 2009

REVIEW: Love Finds You in Holiday, Florida

LOVE FINDS YOU IN HOLIDAY, FLORIDA, by Sandra Bricker, is a part of the Love Finds You Postcard Series by Summerside Press that will eventually feature at least one novel for each state.

I thoroughly enjoyed this fun romance novel. And to understand the strength of that statement, you need to know that romance is not generally my genre of choice. Sandra pulled me in right away with homey, natural main characters and a host of interesting minor characters. She does an excellent job of portraying the seesaw of emotions that comes when a person finds new love after the death of a long-time, beloved spouse. The attraction between the main characters flows naturally, with a tug-of-war between the wants of the heroine when she first arrives in Holiday, Florida, and the wants that develop the longer she stays.

I especially loved the element of mystery included in the story (although I may be a little biased since that's my favorite genre), and the scene with the snake was a scream (literally and figuratively). Overall, Love Finds You in Holiday, Florida is a well-written, fun read.

For more information about Sandra Bricker and her eleven novels, check out her website at www.SandraDBricker.com, and you can read more about Love Finds You in Holiday, Florida at Love at Summerside Press.

Wednesday, November 11, 2009

NANO UPDATE

We are officially one-third of the way through National Novel Writing Month, and I am just short of 15,000 words. In spite of being slightly behind in my wordcount, I have to say that I'm pleased with my progress. I expected to have to spend every spare moment working on my story in order to get 50,000 words written in a month. To my surprise, that's not even close to the truth. Yes, I have to write every day, but I'm finding that 1600-1700 words per day only requires two or three hours (depending on how inspired I am).

I have to admit that I have not completely turned off my internal editor--which is a must in order to write so many words in so short a time. I have, however, compromised with it. Whenever I decide that a certain word doesn't work or I need to rephrase a sentence, I change the text to red, then rewrite the section I don't like. That way I can still count all of the words towards my wordcount, yet I've marked what I will need to take out later. I am also forcing myself to continue writing rather than stopping after every few paragraphs, then every scene, then every chapter, to review and revise, as I usually do. It's a win/win proposition--I get to count all of my words, yet editing/revising will go more smoothly with sections to delete or change already marked.

Saturday, November 7, 2009

CHARACTER NAMES FUNNIES

I’ve got to tell a couple of funnies on a friend. I don’t normally do this, but these are just too good and too related to the subject matter of my blog recently that I just have to share (and he didn’t tell me no when I said I should write a comment about it—I’m just writing a little more than a comment).

My friend is a pastor, not a writer, but he was very pleased to read my posts about how to name characters a week or so ago. He said he has a hard time coming up with names to use in sermon illustrations. You know--there's a member named Bill who sits in the front row, and a boy named Bobby in the preschool dept., etc. And he certainly doesn’t want to make anyone think he’s talking about them. So from now on, his congregation will be treated to a plethora of creative names in their pastor's sermon illustrations.

Then, the other night when we ran into him and his family at a college fair, he gave me his answer to the question I’d posted on Facebook to get ideas for my NaNo story: What kind of fun things would you like to do if you could become invisible? He said that following some of suggestions in the article, I should name my character Crystal because she's "see-through". He’s a fast learner!

 

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